4338.201 · July 20, 2018 AD
Act One, Final Curtain
When Sergeant Charlie Claiborne is summoned to Hobart’s old State Theatre at dawn, he finds more than just a body—he finds staging. With the fog creeping in and silence pressing close, Claiborne must decipher a death set like a performance, and confront the echoes of his own past seeping through the seams.
“Some scenes don’t end when the curtain drops. Some keep playing in the dark, long after the audience has gone home.”
I've walked into plenty of messes in my career. But none with curtains.
The fog rolled in low across the footpaths, a slow crawl of white that licked at my ankles as I stepped out of the car. The first breath of it clung to my throat, tasting of iron and seaweed, sharp with the tang of the Derwent. Nothing like Melbourne's fog—that had been industrial, tasting of exhaust and the Yarra's muddy breath. This was different. Older. The air was damp and heavy, carrying that faint rot from the bins lining the laneway—last night's takeaway boxes sagging open, wet cardboard soaking into the pavement. It was the sort of air that never left you. It lodged in the bones the way certain memories do — moved in, settled down, never bothered to leave.
I'd slipped out of the house, Sandra still curled beneath the quilt in that way she had of sleeping with her back to my side of the bed. Hadn't been intentional once. Now it felt like geography. The note I'd left on the kitchen bench—Called in—sat beside the cold dregs of last night's coffee I hadn't bothered to rinse. Twenty-one years of marriage distilled into two words and unwashed crockery.
Ahead, Hobart's State Theatre crouched in the mist, its art deco façade stark against the dim wash of sodium street-lamps. The place had always struck me as a stubborn old relic, holding its ground even as the city grew tired around it. Sandra had dragged me here once, years back, for some experimental dance piece that left me more confused than moved. I'd sat in the dark watching bodies contort into shapes I couldn't read, feeling the particular loneliness of a man surrounded by people speaking a language he'd never learned. The stonework was streaked with rain and soot, the pale surface chipped and bruised, like a face that had seen too many fights but refused to bow. Brass handles, dulled and sweating with condensation, waited for hands that weren't coming. The windows reflected nothing but the fog's dull glow, empty as unblinking eyes.
The silence unsettled me more than it should have. Even at this hour there was usually a soundscape to lean on: the grind of a bus on Elizabeth Street, the clink of glass from one of the bars still closing up, the uneven footsteps of someone heading home too late. Instead, only the soft crackle of the street-lamps and the distant gulls breaking over the Derwent. Quiet, too quiet—the sort that always makes a copper's skin itch. The sort that used to send my father reaching for his smokes on the building sites, that primal recognition that something wasn't sitting right.
A figure stood sentinel at the theatre's front steps, back straight, shoulders pulled into discipline, clipboard clutched tight enough to serve as both shield and weapon. Constable Sophie Thompson. I'd clocked her straight away—the posture gave her away as much as the neat bun and regulation boots. A newer recruit, yes, but not one of the giddy kind. She turned as I approached, eyes sharp, watching without flinching. No forced grin. No restless fiddling with her pen.
It was a relief, in a way. Too many youngsters filled the silence with chatter when they ought to be listening. Too many froze when the reality of death stepped into the frame. I'd seen both types wash out within three years, the talkers burning through their bravado until the job ate them hollow, the freezers carrying that first body's face into every room they entered until they couldn't enter rooms at all. Sophie didn't seem inclined to either. She simply waited.
The fog coiled around us both, the theatre looming behind her like a witness that would never speak.
"Sergeant Claiborne," she greeted with a nod, her breath forming small clouds in the morning chill.
"Constable." I returned it with a quick glance over her shoulder at the doors, noting the absence of the usual circus that accompanies these calls. No media vultures. Not yet. That would come—it always did—but for now we had the scene to ourselves, which was worth more than any overtime. "You got here first?"
"Arrived just before 5:30," she said, checking her notes with a fluid flick of the pen—a habit I'd noticed before. "Call came through at 5:15. Janitor doing his usual open-up found the theatre already unlocked. Front lobby doors secure, but the internal theatre doors were open. He didn't touch anything after he saw the body. Smart."
Her voice was steady, each word clipped clean, the sort of control drilled into recruits but rarely kept this well under pressure. My old Academy instructor, Ferdinand Hayward, would have approved. The mouth runs when the mind panics, he used to say. A quiet officer is a thinking officer. The fog swirled around her boots, ghosting up the theatre steps, and in the half-light her breath merged with it, two streams of vapour that dissolved into the cold.
I looked her over more deliberately now—not the uniform, the eyes. The polished shoes, the pressed blues, the badge glinting dull gold under the lamps; those told me nothing. You could dress any fool in the kit. It was always the eyes. Twenty-three years on the force teaches you that eyes tell you what reports don't. They tell you who'll hold the line and who'll fold. Who'll remember a victim's face for the right reasons and who'll carry it like a wound that never scabs over.
Hers met mine without wavering, calm but not blank. She wasn't rattled. She was doing what all of us learn sooner or later: compartmentalising. Boxing up the horror, labelling it neatly, tucking it away in those mental drawers we build over time. Dr Kirkpatrick had taught me the proper names for it during those eighteen months of therapy—adaptive coping, emotional regulation, cognitive restructuring. Fancy terms for what coppers had been doing since there were coppers. Hers were still new, still sealed tight. Clean edges. No leakage.
Mine... mine had long since warped. Hinges bent. Drawers swollen from overuse, half-open, spilling their contents in the quiet hours when I let my guard slip. Jennifer Liu's eyes as Fletcher's knife found her throat. Rebecca Barwick's vacant stare from that basement. My mother's face when the lupus finally won and her body just... stopped. One glance into Sophie's clear, measured gaze and I felt the contrast like a weight pressing down. A reminder of what I'd once had, and what the job had taken. What I'd given willingly, telling myself it was the price of service, not understanding that the invoice never stopped coming.
"You spoken to him?" The question came out gruffer than intended, my voice still carrying the remnants of last night's whisky and too few hours of sleep. My throat rasped with it, dry and unkind, and I could taste the sour edge that coffee hadn't yet managed to burn away. The pills I'd swallowed for my knee hadn't kicked in yet either—that familiar grinding ache settling into the joint like an old tenant who knew all the locks.
"Yes, sir. Name's Ivan Halliday. Ex-services. Knew enough to step back once he saw it wasn't right."
Ex-services. That explained the restraint. A man who'd seen his share of endings would know not to muddy a fresh one with his footprints.
"Good. Where is he?" I already had my notepad out, pen hovering above the crisp page that would soon be filled with the details of someone's final moments. How many of these pages had I filled over the years? How many names written in my cramped hand, each one somebody's son or daughter, husband or wife? Enough to paper a room. Enough to wallpaper the whole bloody cottage.
"Inside the lobby. Quiet corner. Got him a tea. He's keeping his head down."
I gave a small nod, the movement brief, then let my gaze drift back up to the theatre. Its façade loomed in the half-light, weather-stained stonework crouching under the weight of a century's worth of stories. The place held itself with the air of something ancient and knowing, shoulders squared against the years, secrets pressed deep into its bones. Sandra would have seen beauty in it. Would have talked about the architecture's persistence, the way it refused to give in. Would have made me see it differently, back when I could still see things through her eyes.
There's a particular silence in buildings like this, and I'd learned to recognise it. Not the hollow kind of an empty place, but something heavier. It wasn't absence—it was anticipation. A hush that had weight to it, like the walls had soaked up every performance and every silence in between, and were holding it all in. Waiting for the next act. The next tragedy. Every building where someone had died held a version of this silence, but theatres were different. Theatres were built for tragedy. They expected it. Welcomed it, even.
I checked my watch: 5:47. The dial caught the lamplight, pale hands ticking with a patience I lacked. Dad's watch—the one Mum had given him for their twentieth anniversary, the one Rick had pressed into my palm after the funeral because he'd have wanted you to have it, Charlie. The face was scratched now, the leather strap replaced twice, but the mechanism kept steady time, outlasting the man who'd wound it every morning of my childhood. The sun wouldn't break through the thick Tasmanian winter sky for another hour, maybe longer. Hobart mornings in July didn't grant warmth quickly—they made you earn it.
The cold seeped into me, curling past the wool of my coat, needling through the old ache in my knee. I barely registered it anymore. Years of long nights, crime scenes in the rain, hours standing in the cold waiting for someone to talk—it all blurred into a numbness I carried like a second skin. My body had learned to expect discomfort, to work through it the way Dad had worked through the pain in his back after the injury, because stopping meant admitting something was broken. What I noticed wasn't the cold, but the weight of the quiet pressing in, a stillness that made the breath in my lungs feel borrowed.
Sophie shifted slightly, sensing my pause. "I've logged the call and set a provisional cordon," she said, almost by reflex. "Initial notes are on the clipboard, and I've started drafting the incident sheet for—"
"Tell me what's strange about it," I cut in, gently, not to scold—to redirect. New constables always want to prove themselves with procedure. Tick the boxes, file the forms, show the sergeant they know the drill. But it's the anomalies that matter, the details that stick out like a splinter under your thumb. The things that make your gut clench before your mind catches up. Twenty-three years had taught me to trust that instinct, to follow the splinter until it revealed what was hiding beneath the skin.
She blinked once, quick and deliberate, but didn't falter. There was something behind her eyes, not just obedience or eagerness—intelligence, calculation. The kind that keeps you sharp enough to last, maybe even long enough to avoid ending up hollowed out like so many others I'd seen. Like the ones I'd investigated during my time in Professional Standards, good coppers gone wrong because nobody taught them where the edges were until they'd already fallen off.
"Locked from the inside. Not alarmed. One door unlatched—from the theatre side."
Her gaze flicked towards the glass foyer. The condensation blurred the ornate handles of the double doors, their brass dulled by time but still catching faint streaks of light from the lamps outside. Shapes bled through the misted glass, warped and spectral, as though the building itself wanted to keep its secrets hidden. Through that glass, somewhere in the dark beyond, a body waited. A story waited to be read from the position of limbs, the angle of a head, the small violences written on dead flesh.
"And the body's not slumped," she added, voice lowered, though no one else lingered to overhear. "He's seated. Front row. Like he's watching something."
That caught. A flicker stirred somewhere behind my eyes, not excitement, not quite dread either—just recognition. The particular recognition of a pattern that didn't belong. I'd seen enough endings to catalogue them like a morbid taxonomy: the careless sprawl of an overdose, the limp weight of a jumper dangling from a rafter, the curled shape of a woman in a bathtub gone still, the scattered arrangement of a domestic gone wrong. Each configuration told its own story. Each position said something, if you'd learned to read it.
But seated, placed, arranged... that wasn't chance. That wasn't the messy truth of most deaths. That was theatre. That was intention. That was a message left for someone to read—and I had the sinking feeling, settling cold in my gut like the fog settling in the laneway, that I was meant to be the one reading it.
I gave her a slow nod, half to myself, the gesture as much acknowledgement as thought. "All right."
Stepping past her, I shoved my hands deeper into my coat pockets. The air inside the foyer pressed against the glass, carrying the smell of dust and velvet even before I crossed the threshold. A weight settled over me, old and familiar—the heaviness of endings that weren't mine but which I'd still be forced to carry. Another case file that would sit thick on my desk. Another face that might walk uninvited into my dreams, joining the others in that crowded gallery of the dead that only I could see.
Somewhere back in Battery Point, Sandra would be waking soon. She'd find my note, make her tea, move through her morning rituals with the careful grace that had first drawn me to her in a gallery in Burnie, a lifetime ago. She wouldn't call. She'd learned not to, just as I'd learned not to expect her to. The distance between us had grown so gradually that neither of us could point to when it started—only that it was there now, vast and silent as the fog wrapping this theatre in its grey embrace.
I pushed through the doors.
"Let's go see the show."






