4338.214 · August 2, 2018 AD
The Creature
In a grim descent into the unknown, Jenny and Sharon break into a stranger’s house chasing rumours and desperation. What they find in the shadows below is not an answer—but a nightmare that leaves their fragile alliance in ruins and Jenny gasping for sanity and safety.
As we stood just inside the door, the oppressive stillness of the house engulfed us like a smothering cloak. The air was thick, heavy with an indefinable tension that pressed against my skin and sent a shiver coursing down my spine. The dim light filtering in through the curtained windows did little to dispel the shadows, which pooled and stretched across the floor like malevolent entities waiting to strike. The enormity of what we were doing—trespassing into a stranger's home based on fragile threads of hope and intuition—descended on me like a weight, making my every breath feel laboured.
A swell of nausea clawed its way up my throat, sharp and acidic, as my mind conjured scenes of unthinkable horror hidden behind these walls. The thought of what we might find—evidence of violence, remnants of a struggle, or something far worse—churned my stomach and made my pulse race. I closed my eyes briefly, swallowing hard to suppress the wave of bile threatening to rise. This house, with its air of abandonment and latent menace, felt like a stage set for tragedy, its secrets crouched just out of sight.
I cast a wary glance at Sharon, her figure framed against the darkened interior. She moved with a purposeful silence, her every step an act of defiance against the encroaching fear. Yet, even as she pressed forward, I couldn’t ignore the unease prickling at the back of my mind. What did Sharon really know? The thought gnawed at me, relentless and unsettling. Her admission that she’d been here earlier without me opened a chasm of doubt, raising questions I wasn’t sure I wanted the answers to. Was she keeping something from me, or was her focus simply narrower, more driven? Either way, her secrets cast a long shadow over our fragile alliance.
"Be careful," I murmured, the words slipping from my lips almost unconsciously as we moved through the living room. Each step felt like trespassing, as if the house itself resented our presence. The hallway ahead promised answers but also harboured the potential for revelations I wasn't sure I was prepared to face. "We don't know what we might find in here."
"I know," Sharon replied, her voice steady but low, each syllable infused with a determination that bordered on desperation. "But if there's any sign our husbands were here, I want to find it." Her words hit me like a hammer, forcing me to confront the grim reality of our mission. This wasn’t just about answers; it was about clawing back some measure of control in a situation that had stolen everything from us.
Sharon came to an abrupt halt in the doorway, causing me to stumble into her. Her body was taut, her hand gripping the doorframe as though bracing for an impact only she could anticipate. "What is it?" I whispered, the unease coiling tighter around my chest as I waited for her to speak.
She tilted her head slightly, her posture alert. "Do you smell that?" she asked, her voice tinged with both curiosity and dread.
I hesitated, letting the silence stretch as I focused on my senses. It didn’t take long for the odour to hit me, sharp and putrid, turning my stomach with its vile potency. "It smells like… rotten meat," I confirmed, my words faltering as the realisation settled in. My gaze followed Sharon’s to a door at the far end of the room, its shadowed edges framing the source of the stench.
For a moment, neither of us moved, the foul smell and the door ahead forming a grim tableau of foreboding. Then Sharon stepped forward, her jaw set, her strides purposeful. Her single-minded resolve was a jarring contrast to the dread rooting me to the spot. My heart thudded loudly in my ears, drowning out the creaks of the floor beneath her feet.
I stood frozen, watching her approach the door as if drawn by some magnetic force. It took a monumental effort to unstick my feet from the floor and follow, my steps hesitant and faltering. My every nerve screamed at me to turn back, to flee the house and its unsettling odour. But the thought of Nial, of the truth buried somewhere in this mystery, propelled me forward, even as fear threatened to consume me.
By the time I reached Sharon’s side, she was already gripping the edge of the sliding door, her fingers curling tightly around its surface. Her knuckles were pale, her grip firm, but she hesitated, her gaze flicking to mine. The look in her eyes wasn’t one of fear but of grim anticipation, as though she were steeling herself for whatever horrors might lie on the other side. I tried to mirror her resolve, swallowing the lump of anxiety lodged in my throat.
"Ready?" Sharon asked, her voice low but unwavering.
I nodded, though my trembling hands betrayed the thin veneer of bravery I tried to project. "Do it," I whispered, the word barely audible over the pounding of my heart.
With a deliberate motion, Sharon slid the door to the side. The rollers groaned against the track, the sound cutting through the stillness like a blade. As the gap widened, the shadows inside seemed to reach out, and the source of the stench hit us full force, making my eyes water and my stomach churn.
The door opening revealed a small landing at the top of a narrow staircase, the space completely enclosed by walls on both sides, making the descent feel claustrophobic. The journey down the carpeted stairs stretched endlessly, each step groaning under our weight, adding an unsettling soundtrack to our cautious movements. The faint, failing rays of the winter sun struggled to penetrate the stairwell’s shadows, casting distorted patterns that seemed to ripple along the walls with every flicker of light.
At the bottom of the staircase, we came to a closed door. Sharon approached it with deliberate care, her movements slow and calculated, as though the very air around us demanded reverence. Just as her hand hovered near the edge of the white wooden door, she froze. Her head turned sharply in my direction, her eyes wide and alert. Lifting a finger to her lips, she signalled for silence, her expression taut with a mix of urgency and caution.
"Do you hear that?" she whispered, the words barely more than a breath.
Time seemed to stand still, the air around us charged with anticipation and fear. My ears strained to catch any sound that might explain Sharon's sudden caution, the beating of my own heart thunderously loud in the silence. The realisation that we might not be alone, that the answers we sought could be just beyond the door, was both exhilarating and terrifying.
My pulse quickened as I strained to listen, every nerve in my body on edge. The oppressive stillness of the house amplified every tiny sound—the faint creak of settling wood, the distant murmur of a breeze against the windows, and then, there it was. A faint rustle, barely perceptible, as if something stirred on the other side of the door. My heart pounded in my chest, each beat a reminder of how deeply we’d ventured into the unknown.
The gravity of our situation was suddenly undeniable. The search for answers about Nial and Adrian had led us here, to this door, to this moment. The air between Sharon and me was electric, charged with the shared understanding that whatever lay beyond this threshold could irrevocably alter the course of our lives.
Sharon's hand finally closed around the handle, her grip firm yet hesitant. The soft rattle of the knob as she tested it broke the heavy silence, the sound echoing faintly in the confined space. Then it came—low, guttural, and unmistakably alive. The growl reverberated through the door, a sound so raw and primal that my entire body tensed, instinctively recoiling from the threat it promised.
A cold sweat broke out along my spine, and I felt the fine hairs on the back of my neck rise in unison with the tightening in my chest. My voice, barely a whisper, found its way to Sharon's ear. "We should go," I murmured, the words trembling with the weight of fear and a desperate plea for retreat.
Sharon's face tightened, her brow furrowing as she met my gaze. "It's probably just a frightened dog," she whispered, her tone calm but unconvincing. Her attempt at rationality did little to dispel the dread pooling in my stomach. Her hand twisted the handle slowly, the deliberate movement betraying her own unease.
The growl came again, louder this time, vibrating through the door like a warning. My stomach churned, the acidic tang of bile rising in the back of my throat. Every instinct in me screamed to turn back, to flee this house and the oppressive darkness it contained. Yet something deeper—a stubborn need for answers, for understanding—rooted me to the spot, forcing me to confront the unknown that loomed just beyond the thin barrier of the door.
With a final, reluctant click, the door opened, revealing a sight so grotesque that it rooted us to the spot, paralysing terror seizing our every muscle. The room was a tableau of unspeakable horror. A black creature, its form unnervingly similar to a panther but cloaked in unnatural shadows, crouched over the lifeless body of a man. Its dark, sinewy frame was hunched low, its face buried deep in the man’s abdomen. The grisly sight of blood pooling beneath the victim, staining the concrete floor, was enough to wrench the air from my lungs. For a moment, time seemed to stop, suspended in the stark, horrifying reality of what lay before us.
Then, as if sensing our intrusion, the creature lifted its head. The motion was unhurried, deliberate, a predator acknowledging new prey. Blood glistened across its sleek, furred face, dripping from its jaw in slow, viscous rivulets. Entrails hung grotesquely from its razor-sharp teeth, and its eyes—dark and empty, glaring with a malevolent intelligence—locked onto ours. The nausea that surged through me was instant and overwhelming, a primal response to a terror so visceral it felt as though it might physically crush me.
Nearby, another figure came into focus—a second man, slumped against the wall. His ashen face held an unsettling stillness, his eyes closed as if in repose, but the brutal reality of his condition was betrayed by the blood seeping from his mouth and the jagged gash that cleaved across his abdomen. The cruel tableau was a testament to the savagery that had unfolded here, the violence still palpable in the air.
The creature’s growl broke the oppressive silence, a deep, guttural sound that reverberated through the room and shook me to my core. It was a sound of warning, of dominance, and it carried with it the unspoken promise of death. The spell that had paralysed me shattered, and a scream erupted from my throat, raw and unrestrained, filling the enclosed space with its piercing intensity.
Before I could comprehend what was happening, Sharon’s hand struck my face. The slap was hard, sharp, the sting radiating through my jaw. It wasn’t anger that drove her action but sheer, desperate instinct—a need to silence me before the creature turned its full attention on us.
The growl deepened, rumbling like thunder in the confined space, and suddenly, impossibly, the second man moved. His eyes snapped open, wild with fear and pain, and he fixed them on us. His mouth worked soundlessly for a moment before he managed to form a single word, silently yet urgently mouthed: “Run.”
The unspoken command hit me like a jolt of electricity, galvanising me into action. But Sharon was already moving, her voice cutting through the horror in a panicked shriek. “Run!” she yelled, her tone raw and jagged with terror. She shoved me hard, propelling me towards the stairs, her frantic urgency overriding any semblance of composure.
My legs, trembling with fear and adrenaline, faltered beneath me. On the second step, I stumbled, my foot catching awkwardly on the edge. The impact was brutal, my knees slamming into the unforgiving surface, pain exploding through my body. Before I could recover, Sharon collided with me, her momentum driving her forward. Her knee struck the back of my thigh with enough force to send me sprawling to the side, and she tumbled down beside me, her cry of frustration mingling with the sharp slap of flesh against wood.
“Shit!” she hissed, scrambling to untangle herself. Her hands clawed at the banister, trying to pull herself upright, but my clumsiness had turned our escape into a chaotic scramble.
Behind us, the room was eerily quiet, the silence more terrifying than any sound. My mind screamed at me to move, to get up, to flee, but my limbs felt like lead, my movements sluggish and uncoordinated. The terror that gripped me was paralysing, a suffocating force that left me gasping for air. The creature was still there, I knew it, watching us, savouring our fear. And we were completely at its mercy.
Then, with a sharp and deafening bang, the door slammed shut behind us, its finality echoing through the confined space and driving an icy spike of panic through my chest. The sound jolted me from my paralysis, sending an involuntary shudder through my body. Twisting awkwardly, pain flared in my back as I managed to look over my shoulder. The sight that met my eyes sent a fresh surge of terror coursing through me.
The man at the bottom of the stairs, his bloodied face twisted in agony and desperation, fixed his wild eyes on us. His expression was a grotesque mask, equal parts pleading and rage. "Get the fuck out of here!” he bellowed, his voice raw and urgent, slicing through the suffocating tension like a blade.
His words were the lifeline we needed, shocking me into action. The stark reality of our situation—the relentless danger that surrounded us—crystallised in that moment. We were trapped in a house with a creature capable of unspeakable violence, and the only path to survival was escape.
Adrenaline flooded my system like a tidal wave, fuelling a speed I didn’t know I possessed. I scrambled up the stairs, my legs pumping in a desperate rhythm, pain and fear eclipsed by the sheer instinct to survive. Sharon was just behind me, her breath coming in sharp, panicked gasps that mirrored my own. The terror forged an unspoken bond between us, a shared resolve that drove us towards safety with reckless urgency.
As we reached the top landing, a fleeting glance back revealed the man still hunched over at the bottom of the stairs, his figure bathed in the dim, sickly light from the moon that shone through the window beside us. His face was a mask of anguish, but his voice rose again, commanding and desperate. "Go!" he shouted, the word ricocheting up the stairwell, reigniting the urgency in my chest.
Sharon's hand clamped around my arm, her grip unyielding as she pulled me forward, propelling us across the living room. Our movements were frantic, disjointed, and bordering on chaotic, each step driven by the singular focus of reaching the front door. My heart thundered in my chest, each beat a drumbeat of panic as we sprinted towards what felt like salvation.
Ahead of me, Sharon surged forward, her desperation lending her a speed that I struggled to match. Her grip on my arm slipped away, her focus narrowing to a razor-sharp point as she reached the door and threw it open. She didn’t hesitate, didn’t look back, her sole aim to escape the nightmare that had engulfed us.
"The door!" I shouted, my voice hoarse and strained. It was a plea for her to wait, to ensure we left no barrier open to whatever was inside. But Sharon didn’t stop. She didn’t even glance back. Her figure disappeared into the night as I skidded to a halt at the threshold, my shaking hands fumbling to slam the door shut behind me.
The cold evening air hit me like a slap, sharp and bracing, my breath forming frantic clouds in the darkness. "Sharon, wait up!" I yelled, panic rising in my chest as I turned and bolted after her. The grass was damp beneath my feet, its slickness threatening to unbalance me as I sprinted towards the car.
Sharon flung herself into the driver’s seat. The door slammed shut with a finality that mirrored my own desperate gesture moments before, and the roar of the ignition ripped through the quiet night. The sight of the car shuddering to life, the taillights glowing like embers, sent a fresh wave of dread through me.
Terror twisted in my gut as I pushed my legs harder, every fibre of my being screaming at me to move faster. The thought of being left behind in that house of horrors, alone with the creature, was a fear that eclipsed everything else. It was primal, a survival instinct clawing its way to the surface.
"Don’t you dare leave me!" I screamed, my voice cracking under the weight of desperation as I closed the gap to the car.
In the distance, the shrill wail of police sirens rose above the quiet hum of the evening, their eerie cadence slicing through the night like a blade. The sound, both a harbinger of help and a reminder of danger, spurred me to action, my legs pumping harder as if fleeing from the echoes themselves. A visceral instinct to survive propelled me forward, and within seconds, I was in the passenger seat, slamming the door shut with such force the entire car shuddered. The jarring thud reverberated through the confined space, a grim punctuation to the chaos we’d left behind.
For a heartbeat—or perhaps an eternity—Sharon and I sat frozen, our breathing ragged, our wide-eyed stares locked in a shared moment of paralytic fear. Neither of us spoke; the silence was alive, a suffocating entity in the small cabin of the car. Our faces, pale and streaked with sweat, reflected back at us faintly in the windshield, ghostly apparitions of the terror we carried with us.
The rising crescendo of the sirens drew closer, snapping us from our stupor. "Drive!" I barked, my voice hoarse, raw, and filled with urgency. The single word, so forceful and primal, cut through Sharon’s inertia like a whip crack. Without hesitation, her foot slammed onto the accelerator, sending the car hurtling forward. The rear tires spun briefly against the gravel, kicking up a cloud of dust that lingered in the air like a ghostly veil, marking our hurried escape.
As we sped down the dark road, the flashing blue and red lights of several police cars blazed past us, heading in the direction of Luke’s house. Their sirens screeched like mournful wails, and for a fleeting moment, I felt a twinge of relief. They weren’t coming after us. They had bigger horrors to contend with. Still, the sight of those vehicles, vanishing into the night, left my stomach knotted with dread. Whatever lay behind us now belonged to them—and I couldn’t decide whether to feel grateful or horrified.
I collapsed into the passenger seat, my body going slack as the adrenaline that had sustained me finally ebbed away. My muscles felt like jelly, weak and trembling with exhaustion, while my chest heaved in an effort to calm the erratic rhythm of my breathing. Outside, the blurred streetlights streaked past like spectral sentinels, their faint, repetitive glow stark against the darkness that swallowed everything else. The world beyond the car was surreal, a dreamscape of moving light and shadows that clashed with the turmoil churning within me.
Tears pricked at the corners of my eyes, their presence a testament to the emotional weight I could no longer hold back. I clenched my hands tightly together, forcing them into a semblance of control as they shook uncontrollably in my lap. The tremors were involuntary, a physical manifestation of the fear and horror still coursing through my body.
The silence between Sharon and me was heavy, oppressive, yet necessary. It wrapped around us like a thick fog, offering temporary respite from the need to confront what had just happened. Words felt impossible, each unspoken thought swirling in the void between us. But even in that silence, the images of what we had seen replayed relentlessly in my mind—a grotesque film reel I couldn’t stop, couldn’t unsee. The room, the smell, the creature, and the man’s desperate eyes as he screamed at us to run.
"Get out."
Sharon's words sliced through the tension in the car with the precision of a scalpel, sharp and chilling. The weight of her tone made the temperature in the cabin seem to drop several degrees, the chill seeping into my bones. As the car rolled to a stop outside my house, her directive hung in the air like a judgment passed, final and inescapable.
"Keep your mouth shut. We were never there," she added, her voice steady but strained, each word laced with a controlled desperation. Yet, beneath the hardened exterior, a faint tremor betrayed the fear gnawing at her resolve.
I sat frozen, paralysed by the abruptness of her command, my mind still caught in the unravelling trauma of the evening. The enormity of what we'd witnessed refused to release me, its grip on my thoughts relentless and suffocating. I turned to Sharon, my expression blank, my mouth opening slightly as though to form a protest, a question, anything—but no words came.
"Get the fuck out!" she screamed, the sharp escalation of her voice snapping me out of my stupor. The raw desperation in her tone was like a slap across the face, jolting me into movement. I noticed her hands gripping the steering wheel, trembling violently, their whitened knuckles a stark contrast against the worn leather. She was barely holding it together, her composure a fragile mask threatening to shatter at any moment.
It felt as though she'd fired a bullet directly into my chest, the impact of her words physical, visceral. My body moved automatically, clumsy and disjointed, fumbling with the door handle as though I'd forgotten how to perform even the simplest of tasks. My legs felt like lead as I stumbled out of the car, nearly tripping over the kerb in my haste to comply.
I barely managed to stand upright before Sharon leaned across the passenger seat and slammed the door shut with such force that the sound reverberated down the otherwise silent street. The thud echoed in my ears, a punctuation mark to the fractured connection between us.
For a moment, I stood there, rooted in place under the harsh glare of the streetlight. Its cold, artificial glow illuminated my stillness, turning me into a solitary figure on the deserted street. I watched, helpless and dumbfounded, as Sharon's car screeched away, her reckless departure mirroring the chaotic energy that now coursed through my veins.
The roar of her engine faded into the distance, leaving me alone with the hum of the streetlight and the whispers of the night. My body trembled, my heart pounding against my ribcage like a drumbeat of despair. I wrapped my arms around myself, suddenly aware of the cold seeping into my skin, though whether it came from the air or the icy aftermath of Sharon’s departure, I couldn’t tell.
I turned towards the house, my feet moving mechanically. Each step felt heavy with the weight of what had transpired, as I walked towards the door and into the fragile sanctuary of home.






