4338.210 · July 29, 2018 AD
Contradictions
Inside Luke Smith’s home, Karl and Sarah find a world so polished it feels staged—every surface scrubbed of life, every truth wrapped in contradiction. As Gladys’ story begins to unravel under its own precision, Karl realises the deception isn’t just about who’s missing—but about who’s directing the scene.
“You can tell a lot about a lie from the way a house is cleaned. The truth leaves fingerprints. Lies get out the bleach.”
Standing in the living room, the air felt unnaturally still—thick with tension and unspoken questions, as dense and unmoving as Hobart's winter fog. The quiet wasn't peaceful. It was waiting. The house seemed to hold its breath around us, as if aware we didn't belong here.
The temperature inside hovered just above uncomfortable—not quite warm enough to be welcoming, not cold enough to justify keeping our jackets on.
Everything about the interior felt artificial, not lived in. The furnishings were arranged with unnatural care—sofa and armchairs aligned at perfect angles, coffee table centred to the millimetre, not a cushion out of place. The surfaces gleamed, not with the warm sheen of habit, but the cold perfection of chemical cleaning. The faint tang of lemon-scented disinfectant lingered in the air, just discernible beneath the more neutral tones of polished tiled flooring and freshly vacuumed carpet.
The carpet itself showed vacuum lines so precise they could have been measured with a ruler—all running in the same direction, undisturbed by footfall. In the corners where carpet met skirting board, not a speck of dust had gathered. Someone had used a small brush there, probably within the last few hours.
There was no clutter. No shoes kicked off by the door, no remote on the armrest, no jacket slung over a dining chair. No magazine left half-read on the coffee table, no water glass with a faint ring of condensation, no junk mail stacked on the kitchen bench. It wasn't a home—it was a display. A showroom. A façade so carefully maintained it practically screamed to be questioned.
Even the art on the walls—bland abstract prints in matching frames—hung at identical heights, spaced with geometric precision. The kind of décor that came from a furniture package, chosen not for personal meaning but for inoffensive neutrality.
Out of the corner of my eye, I caught Sarah already moving.
Ever curious, ever impulsive, she'd started to scan the room with that restless energy she never quite managed to contain. Her movements were technically restrained—professional, yes—but undercut by that barely concealed eagerness to uncover something. Anything. It was the same quality that had almost got her suspended twice during her probationary period at Glenorchy Station, the same instinct that had also led to her solving three cold burglaries within her first year.
She drifted towards a sideboard lined with framed photographs, her fingers hovering dangerously close to the nearest one. The light caught the strands of her dark hair as she leaned in, head tilted with familiar intensity, her whole body angled like a magnet drawn towards answers. I could see her eyes darting from frame to frame, cataloguing faces, dates, locations. That analytical mind working at full speed.
"Sarah!" I hissed sharply, the word low but cutting.
She froze, half-turning to glance over her shoulder. Her face registered a flicker of guilt quickly masked by defiance. Her eyes met mine with a spark—equal parts apology and challenge.
The reprimand came automatically. Instinct. Habit. Preservation of the scene had been drilled into me over years—long before I'd even worn a badge. We had no warrant. No search protocol in place. Every careless smudge or moved object risked contaminating a space that might soon be classed as a crime scene. And more importantly, Gladys was watching. Any evidence we found through improper means would be inadmissible.
"Don't touch," I mouthed, the words deliberate, the message unmistakable.
She nodded once—curtly—and took a half step back, her hands dropping to her sides and curling into fists. But I knew her well enough to sense the resistance beneath the compliance. She was holding herself in check, barely. Her weight shifted from foot to foot, a restless energy looking for an outlet.
Why does she always have to fiddle with things? The thought crossed my mind with a flush of exasperation. But it wasn't just irritation. There was something else threaded through it—a reluctant respect for her tenacity, maybe. Or something less professional I wasn't prepared to name. Sarah had always been like this—pushing boundaries, testing limits, unable to simply observe without interacting. It was what made her both brilliant and dangerous.
Gladys had told us to wait whilst she fetched Jamie. That had been the story, anyway. Yet it hadn't taken Sarah more than a breath to start poking at the edges of it. Some part of me respected that. Some part of me wanted to stop her.
"I don't see any dinner preparations," Sarah whispered, voice flat with doubt as she scanned the open-plan kitchen beyond the lounge.
I followed her gaze. The countertops were spotless—gleaming granite that reflected the overhead downlights like still water. The stovetop cold, its black ceramic surface unmarked by use. No pans, no food out, not even a chopping board. The bench was as sterile as a display home—untouched, unused. A tableau, not a kitchen. The tea towel hanging from the oven door rail was folded with military precision, its corners perfectly aligned.
The kitchen opened onto the living area in that modern, open-plan style that had become fashionable in Hobart's newer suburbs. But it made the absence of activity even more glaring. There was nowhere to hide the evidence of cooking. No aroma of garlic or onions, no steam, no heat, no life.
Her observation crystallised the obvious. Jamie—if he were here—wasn't making dinner. No wine glasses set out, no plates warming, no ingredients arranged on the bench. No traces of heat, of life. Nothing. The kitchen was a stage that had never seen a performance.
"No," I said quietly, my eyes still tracking the worktops. "And I don't think that's the only thing Gladys is being untruthful about, either."
The words came softly, but they carried weight. My suspicion had been simmering since the roadside stop. Now it was starting to boil. The contradictions were piling up too fast, too deliberately. Someone was orchestrating this—feeding us just enough truth to keep us moving, whilst hiding the larger deception beneath layers of plausible misdirection.
Sarah turned back towards me, one brow lifting in that way she had when something caught her interest. There was a flicker of something else, too—excitement, maybe. Curiosity sharpening into focus. That gleam in her eye that said she'd caught the scent of something worth pursuing.
This house wasn't just hiding Jamie. It was hiding something bigger. And we were standing in the middle of it, invited guests in someone else's carefully constructed narrative.
Gladys returned then, her entrance quiet, but not casual.
Her footsteps on the polished tiles were measured, deliberate. She'd composed herself in whatever room she'd disappeared into—smoothed her hair, steadied her breathing. But the tension remained in her shoulders, in the way her hands clasped together in front of her waist.
"Jamie doesn't appear to be here," she announced.
Her voice carried that same uneasy poise I'd heard in countless interviews—where the speaker wanted to sound composed but couldn't quite smooth the tremble in their throat. The tone held a flicker of surprise, a shade too rehearsed to convince. And her hands—those betrayed her outright. The way her fingers twisted together briefly, a nervous tic manifesting against her will. Her knuckles were white, the pressure betraying the anxiety she was trying to hide.
I watched her closely, noting everything. The slight dilation of her pupils. The faint sheen of perspiration along her hairline despite the cool temperature. The way her gaze didn't quite meet mine, instead fixing on a point just past my left shoulder.
Her delivery wasn't spontaneous—it was theatre. There was too much modulation in her tone, too much precision in her phrasing. It was as though she were reciting lines memorised in a mirror, each word carefully chosen to preserve a narrative already beginning to collapse under its own weight. I'd seen this before—witnesses who'd rehearsed their stories so thoroughly they forgot to make them sound natural.
Her statement hung there, unanswered, suspended in the air between us like a dropped thread of conversation no one dared pick up.
Gone was the image of Jamie cooking dinner just minutes before. Now he had vanished entirely. No explanation. No apology. Just a changed story—and a conspicuously absent host. The wine she'd purchased now sat on the kitchen bench, unopened, unnecessary. A prop that no longer served its purpose.
"Does Jamie live alone?" I asked, deliberately keeping my tone light. Feigned ignorance had its uses. It was a test, not a genuine inquiry. I already knew the answer—Louise had mentioned Jamie's partner during our initial interview. But I wanted to see how Gladys would frame it.
"Um... no," Gladys replied, hesitation dripping through the pause. "He has a partner."
A beat. She swallowed, her throat working visibly.
"Oh," I said, affecting mild surprise. "Is she about, then?"
The misgendering was intentional—a ploy. I watched her face closely, waiting for the crack. It was an old interrogation technique—introduce a deliberate error and watch how they correct it. The manner of correction often revealed more than the correction itself.
It came fast.
Her cheeks flushed crimson, the colour spreading like a dropped glass of red wine over a white tablecloth. A flush like that wasn't just embarrassment—it was impact. The colour rose from her neck, staining her cheeks and reaching the tips of her ears. Whether from offence, panic, or the stress of realising her web of lies had just caught another strand, it didn't matter. The involuntary reaction was proof enough that I'd struck something real. Something raw.
"I'm sorry if I've embarrassed you," I said quickly, softening the delivery. No point in pushing too hard—she might shut down entirely, and I still needed her talking. The trick was knowing when to dig and when to smooth the earth. Keep them off-balance, but not so defensive they stopped cooperating.
Gladys forced a smile—tight, brittle. Lips drawn taut over her teeth, not reaching her eyes. It was the kind of smile people wore when they wanted to pretend everything was fine whilst the floor crumbled beneath them.
"His name is Luke," she corrected, the emphasis on his too sharp to be anything but deliberate. "But they've been having a few personal troubles lately, and Luke has gone to Melbourne for a few weeks to think things through."
"Oh, I see," I replied, calm on the outside.
Inside, my thoughts were sprinting. Racing ahead, connecting dots, drawing lines between disparate pieces of information that should have formed a coherent picture but instead kept fragmenting into contradictions.
The contradiction wasn't minor—it was seismic. Just minutes ago, she'd been en route to this house with wine for a man supposedly cooking dinner. That man, by implication, was Jamie. But now, Luke—who had been the one on the other end of her panicked call during the traffic stop—had vanished to Melbourne for introspection?
And hadn't Louise, just the day before, been told Jamie was the one in Melbourne? I could still hear Louise's voice: "Jamie's in Melbourne for a few days." So which one was supposed to be away? Or were they both gone, and this entire house was an elaborate misdirection?
It was all beginning to blur. Names swapping places, locations shifting, timelines refusing to align.
Who was meant to be away? Who was meant to be cooking? And where, exactly, did Kain Jeffries fit in? The young man, Jamie’s nephew, whom Louise had sent over to check on Jamie, yet apparently, according to Louise and the conversation she had with Luke, Kain had never arrived.
Someone was lying. Possibly all of them. Or possibly they were all telling partial truths, fragments of a larger deception none of them fully understood.
My chest tightened, that familiar detective's sense that we weren't climbing towards resolution but plunging deeper into a maze. Every answer branched into more questions, every narrative forked and doubled back. It was the kind of confusion born not from coincidence, but design. Someone had constructed this deliberately—layers upon layers of misdirection, each truth contaminated with just enough lie to make verification impossible.
Who is actually missing here? Jamie? Luke? Kain?
Or were we being played into believing anyone was truly missing at all? What if this was all distraction—smoke and mirrors whilst something else entirely unfolded beyond our sight?
The house—this pristine, surgically curated house—suddenly felt even more suffocating in its silence. The contradictions were too neatly packaged to be accidental. Too deliberately ambiguous to be random. The very perfection of the space felt menacing now, as if the sterility itself was part of the deception. A blank canvas onto which any story could be projected.
The threads of truth were there. Somewhere. Woven through all the lies and half-truths and careful omissions.
But they were knotted so tightly together it was impossible to tell where one ended and the next began. And the more I pulled at any single thread, the tighter the knot became.
"May I use the bathroom, please?" I asked lightly, voice casual despite the storm behind my ribs.
The request wasn't about comfort. It was movement—tactical pretext wrapped in politeness. Permission to roam without framing it as a search. In situations like this, legitimacy wasn't about the line itself but how you danced along its edge. Get them to invite you deeper into the house. Give yourself plausible reason to observe, to catalogue, to search without technically searching.
"Sure," Gladys said, gesturing down the hall. "It's just down the end of the hallway on the left."
Her direction was too quick, too helpful. Most people would have offered to show me. Most people would have hesitated before giving a stranger access to the private spaces of someone else's home. But Gladys wanted me away from the living room, away from Sarah, isolated in the back of the house where she could control the narrative.
I gave a nod, masking my intentions beneath the ordinary. But my body had already shifted into investigative gear—muscles tensing, senses sharpening, adrenaline beginning its slow climb. Every footstep, every glance, would be measured. Every open door another possible truth. Every closed door another question.
Gladys might think she was steering the story, directing me away from whatever she wanted hidden.
But now, I was inside her stage.
And I was about to find out what was behind the curtain.
